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I plopped into bed. God I was whipped.


I have no idea how it happened, but some how Iggy hunted down the giant candy stash in my moms house. He smuggles every piece into his room and told Angel, Gazzy, and Nudge he wanted to show them a new video on you tube, but turns out the had chowed down on all of the candy! All stinking 493 pieces and they didn't even tell me my mom had candy stashed!
After busting them, I found out the real problem wasn't the fact that I didn't get ANY candy, but that they had just eaten 493 pieces of HIGH SUGAR candy.
You know the way Gazzy acts regularly, right? Multiply that by 112. Then add that craziness to Iggy, Nudge, and Angel and the solution of calming them down doesn't exist.

It has taken me and Fang six hours to finally wear them down.

A floor board creaked and a shaft of light broke through my slightly crack door. I got up off my bed trying to make the least amount of noise possible. I unfurled my wings slightly and prepared to lunge.
A foot entered my room and that was all the signal I needed to spring.

In midair, half way toward my target, the door opened wide enough to reveal an unexpecting Fang.
That idiot, He knows to never sneak up on me!
I opened my wings all the way to stop my attack. I wasn't soon enough and still crash into Fang, knocking him tot the floor.
I lifted my head quickly, put my hand over his mouth and listened to see if we woke up the kids. Fang was trying to talk, but it all came out mumbled.
When I didn't here anything, but still had a killer grip on Fangs mouth. While I was calming down, Fang licked my hand, annoyed that I hadn't let go. I jerked my hand away from his lips and stormed into my room. I pushed my door hard to where it would have slammed shut if he wouldn't have stopped it. I sat on my bed, left eyebrow cocked, tight lipped, waiting for an explanation. He gently shut the door and walked over to me. He stood in front of my shifting from foot to foot and scratching his head.
"Uhh….I- I- I couldn't sleep." He made up.
"So you came to my room to…"
"Umm… I can to…" He stammered.  "Give me a second and let me make up a excuse, will ya'?" He smiled at me.
"Um hum, that what I thought." I relaxed and laid down on my bed and stared at the ceiling fan.
He walked to the other side of the bed and lay down beside me. "You think there is any candy left?"
"Iggy was the one that hunted it down."
"He's blind."
"Do you really think that stopped him from finding every little piece?"
I yawned loudly and Fang pulled me into his arms. I had a moment of rejection, but gave in. I was too tired.
"Go to sleep, you're tired."
"Will you go back to your bed when I'm asleep?"
He thought about the question. "No, unless you want me to."
He shifted.
I made a grab for him. "No! I don't want you to leave."
He smiled at me. I stared into his endless black eyes, warm and sparkling - for now - at me. I had no urge to go to sleep now. I smiled back at him. I yawned again. I still wasn't going to sleep, not with him by my side. I'm not tired enough yet.
"Do you miss school?" He asked me, probley just making conversation.
"A little, I kinda miss being able to be around other kids with out having to protect them from Flyboys. Some of the kids didn't treat us like total freaks. Some of them were really, really nice."
A looked of pain crossed his face. He went back to his unemotional self. He unwrapped his arms from me and stared at the ceiling,
"Are you going to go to sleep?" he said in a hurt tone.
What the heck?! What is his problem? I just said some of the kids were…really, really nice… a memory jolted into my head. Me kissing Sam. Could that be what his thinking about?
"Fang. Sam. I know I kissed him and everything, but you know. It really meant nothing. He was a freak. And you just can't be mad at me for that! You suck that read heads face too. But in the end….you really are the only thing that really means something besides you know…the rest of the flock and saving the world and that stuff, but you are really the biggest thing that means to me." I was babbling now, great. "I really couldn't live life with out you. An you know-"
"Max. Shut up."
I was taken back.
I was about to turn up so my back was facing him. He caught my shoulder and turned me back to face him.
"Max," I put on my best 'I'm mad at you face'. "Shut up and kiss me."
His lips were on mine faster than I could realize what was going on. It took me a minuet but I got it and kissed him back. I wrapped my arms around his neck and his arms laced themselves around my waist.
We parted at the same time. I leaned my forehead against his.
"You are so stupid, useless, and you can't do anything right." I planted a light kiss on his lips.
"You are difficult, hard to please, and forever changing your mind." He gave me a light kiss back. "You're a mess in a dress, can't show up on time, even if it would save your life."
"Hey!" I punched his shoulder.
"Gosh Max. I'm kidding." He smiled at me.
"You're beautiful, incredible, and I can't get you out of my head. You're funny, irresistible, and everything I ever wanted." He whispered into my hair.
I yawned loudly. No! I didn't want to get tired now!
"You're tired. Go to sleep." I didn't really want to, but he looked tired too. So, he didn't have to tell me twice.
I fell asleep against his chest, smiling.
This was a story I wrote for my little cousin. She loves Maximum Ride........and happy, lovy~dovy ending.
Let me know what you think!
P.S. I kinda made the story off of Orionthis' songs "Shut Up and Kiss Me" and "According to You"

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This sucks. Why are you still reading this. I wrote it ages ago. Whyyyyy. All of my gallery is outdated....

Maximum Ride <Max>, Iggy, Gazzy, Nudge, Angel, and Fang (C) James Patterson
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creativewithreason Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Student General Artist
I still read it because 1. I love maximum ride and 2. I love lovey-dovey stories :3
Deadmau5Luv Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FANGIRLING!!! *Dies of fangirling*
TornadoMetVolcano Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ilovecassandraclare Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ahavat234 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
RealNikkiP Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Student General Artist
you know, "Shut up and kiss me" was me and my first boyfriends song."Acorrding to You"was our song as well.I was really taken back with this.Great job.
MajorPayne101 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
grrr... i really wish i was max in this story as well... :(
on the other hand...
I <3 FANG!!!!
royishot Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
awwwww how cute :blush:
Jayspark Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011
OMG DROOLZ *fangirl moment*
SO....DARN.....GOOD...!Well done ;)
Atlanata Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011
I know right...<<....>>
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